I wrote the last post with my feet kicked up on the sofa on my phone. Like a big text msg. I looked at it this morning and realized I mistook CO2 with CO. One molecule of Carbon, not 2. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
I actually hate that first person narrative style. It’s boring. This kind of writing usually begins in situ, then backs up to the start of the story. Like this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
I reached down to pick up they hydration pack that I dropped next to my pack and realized it had frozen solid in the few minutes I had been huddled below the windbreak. <\/p>
<\/p>I made this up.<\/cite><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n
Then back to the start of the story arc.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
I much prefer the more introspective style of writing found in … I think it might be called The Sharp End … if we’re talking about adventure \/ alpinism writing. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Someone else direct experience can be interesting, but the subtext of “what did u learn?” is way more interesting. I’m not going to write another first person narrative like the last one.<\/p>\n\n\n\n